Update bip-0039.mediawiki #1547
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5atoshiNakamoto commented at 9:51 pm on January 29, 2024: contributorgrammar
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Update bip-0039.mediawiki
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twonpuncho23 approved
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0xGRAV3R approved
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0xGRAV3R commented at 1:38 am on February 24, 2024: none
Text is well-structured and mostly grammatically correct. However, there are a few suggestions for improvement:
Punctuation in Lists: In the “Wordlists” section, consider using semicolons instead of commas for separating the list items for better clarity and readability.
Capitalization Consistency: Maintain consistency in capitalization. For example, in the “Wordlists” section, some items start with capital letters while others do not.
Clarify Pronouns: In the “Generating the mnemonic” section, consider specifying what “it” refers to in the sentence “With more entropy security is improved but the sentence length increases.” It might be clearer to say, “With more entropy, the security of the mnemonic sentence is improved, but its length increases.”
Wordlists Section: There’s a repetition of the “Wordlists” heading. You can remove the redundant heading.
Spacing: Ensure consistent spacing between sections and paragraphs for better readability and aesthetics.
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prusnak commented at 3:20 pm on April 25, 2024: contributorNACK
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jonatack commented at 3:34 pm on April 25, 2024: contributorClosing per feedback from BIP author.
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jonatack closed this on Apr 25, 2024
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Ardlan63 commented at 1:47 pm on July 22, 2024: none
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