I reformatted the entire document to look pretty in both standard text and Markdown. This should make it a lot easier to read.
Also, I incorporated my OS X 10.8 build instructions with Homebrew as the package manager. I originally posted them on the Bitcoin Stackexchange in the question Trouble compiling bitcoind on OSX with homebrew. I've used these instructions twice now, so I'm fairly certain they'll work.
I do recognize that I need to find a way to get the Makefile to look at Homebrew's Cellar without needing to be patched. WIP on my branch entitled feature/osx10.8-bitcoind-compilation.