wallet, refactor: #24584 follow-ups #25734

pull josibake wants to merge 7 commits into bitcoin:master from josibake:josibake-24584-follow-ups changing 13 files +180 −163
  1. josibake commented at 11:16 am on July 29, 2022: member

    This PR is to address follow-ups for #24584, specifically:

    • Remove redundant, hard-to-read code by adding a new OutputType and adding shuffle, erase, and push_back methods for CoinsResult
    • Add missing BOOST_ASSERT to unit test
    • Ensure functional test only runs if using descriptor wallets
    • Improve readability of AttemptSelection by removing triple-nested if statement

    Note for reviewers: commit refactor: add new helper methods should throw an “unused function warning”; the function is used in the next commit. Also, commit wallet: switch to new shuffle, erase, push_back will fail to compile, but this is fixed in the next commit with a scripted-diff. the commits are separate like this (code change then scripted-diff) to improve legibility.

  2. fanquake added the label Wallet on Jul 29, 2022
  3. josibake commented at 11:18 am on July 29, 2022: member
    tagging @furszy , @LarryRuane , @Xekyo , and @aureleoules for review as this addresses feedback from y’all on #24584 . thanks for the thorough review and great suggestions, let me know if i missed anything!
  4. furszy commented at 12:16 pm on July 29, 2022: member

    Cool. Obvious concept ACK due co-authoring some of the commits.

    This cleans a lot of boilerplate code of the recently introduced changes.

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  7. DrahtBot commented at 9:59 pm on July 29, 2022: contributor

    The following sections might be updated with supplementary metadata relevant to reviewers and maintainers.

    Conflicts

    Reviewers, this pull request conflicts with the following ones:

    • #25806 (wallet: single outputs grouping calculation by furszy)
    • #25789 (test: clean and extend availablecoins_tests coverage by furszy)
    • #25685 (wallet: Faster transaction creation by removing pre-set-inputs fetching responsibility from Coin Selection by furszy)
    • #25659 (wallet: simplify ListCoins implementation by furszy)
    • #24897 ([Draft / POC] Silent Payments by w0xlt)
    • #23417 (wallet, spkm: Move key management from DescriptorScriptPubKeyMan to wallet level KeyManager by achow101)
    • #22341 (rpc: add getxpub by Sjors)
    • #19602 (wallet: Migrate legacy wallets to descriptor wallets by achow101)

    If you consider this pull request important, please also help to review the conflicting pull requests. Ideally, start with the one that should be merged first.

  8. in test/functional/wallet_avoid_mixing_output_types.py:127 in e40eaf6e1d outdated
    123@@ -124,6 +124,7 @@ def set_test_params(self):
    124 
    125     def skip_test_if_missing_module(self):
    126         self.skip_if_no_wallet()
    127+        self.skip_if_no_sqlite()
    


    aureleoules commented at 11:36 am on July 30, 2022:

    this doesn’t seem to fix it :/

    0python test/functional/wallet_avoid_mixing_output_types.py
    1...
    2test_framework.authproxy.JSONRPCException: Legacy wallets cannot provide bech32m addresses (-8)
    

    josibake commented at 5:16 pm on July 31, 2022:
    i think this is the best we can do right now with the test framework. if no sqlite, skip. if sqlite and bdb, pass the --descriptors flag, else the test will fail
  9. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:109 in e40eaf6e1d outdated
    112+
    113+void CoinsResult::erase(std::set<COutPoint>& preset_coins)
    114+{
    115+    for (auto& it : coins) {
    116+        auto& vec = it.second;
    117+        auto i = find_if(vec.begin(), vec.end(), [&](const COutput &c) { return preset_coins.count(c.outpoint);});
    


    aureleoules commented at 11:36 am on July 30, 2022:
    0        auto i = std::find_if(vec.begin(), vec.end(), [&](const COutput &c) { return preset_coins.count(c.outpoint);});
    
  10. aureleoules commented at 11:55 am on July 30, 2022: member
    Concept ACK This simplifies the code and is easier to read! I left some comments.
  11. w0xlt commented at 1:58 pm on August 1, 2022: contributor
    Approach ACK. These changes improve code readability and organization.
  12. in src/wallet/spend.h:41 in b4852bce6a outdated
    37@@ -38,6 +38,7 @@ TxSize CalculateMaximumSignedTxSize(const CTransaction& tx, const CWallet* walle
    38  * the CoinsResult struct as if it was a vector
    39  */
    40 struct CoinsResult {
    41+    std::map<OutputType, std::vector<COutput>> coins;
    


    furszy commented at 4:38 pm on August 1, 2022:
    would make it private so the field access is encapsulated.

    josibake commented at 9:33 am on August 2, 2022:
    id prefer to keep it simple for now. im not convinced it’s worth re-writing the coinselection_tests to create TxoutTypes just to map them back to COutPuts and to add methods just for checking the size in the availablecoins_tests
  13. in src/wallet/spend.h:50 in b4852bce6a outdated
    54@@ -54,6 +55,9 @@ struct CoinsResult {
    55      * i.e., methods can work with individual OutputType vectors or on the entire object */
    56     uint64_t size() const;
    57     void clear();
    58+    void erase(std::set<COutPoint>& preset_coins);
    


    furszy commented at 4:39 pm on August 1, 2022:
    Note: this function will not longer be needed after #25685.
  14. in src/wallet/scriptpubkeyman.cpp:1973 in c81cb2aa86 outdated
    1965@@ -1966,6 +1966,10 @@ bool DescriptorScriptPubKeyMan::SetupDescriptorGeneration(const CExtKey& master_
    1966         desc_prefix = "tr(" + xpub  + "/86'";
    1967         break;
    1968     }
    1969+    case OutputType::UNKNOWN: {
    1970+        // Do nothing if the address is of UNKNOWN OutputType
    1971+        return false;
    1972+    }
    


    furszy commented at 6:29 pm on August 1, 2022:
    Could assert(false) here. DescriptorScriptPubKeyMan::SetupDescriptorGeneration is called from CWallet::SetupDescriptorScriptPubKeyMans and this latter function is already skipping this type.

    josibake commented at 8:44 am on August 2, 2022:
    good point, SetupDescriptorGeneration is actually defined on the DescriptorScriptPubKeyMan and we should never have a spk_m setup for the unknown type, so assert(false) is better than just returning a bool.
  15. furszy commented at 6:43 pm on August 1, 2022: member
    3e6cbb2d doesn’t compile without ac0585d4. Better to squash them.
  16. furszy commented at 6:48 pm on August 1, 2022: member
    Another point, CanGetAddresses and GetActiveScriptPubKeyMans loop through the available output types vector as well. And they are not included in c81cb2aa
  17. josibake commented at 8:43 am on August 2, 2022: member

    Another point, CanGetAddresses and GetActiveScriptPubKeyMans loop through the available output types vector as well. And they are not included in c81cb2a

    both functions you mentioned call GetScriptPubKeyMan(), which checks if there is a spk_m for the specified output type in either m_internal_spk_managers or m_external_spk_managers. spk_ms are setup by SetupDescriptorPubKeyMans, where we are skipping the unknown type

  18. josibake commented at 9:45 am on August 2, 2022: member

    3e6cbb2 doesn’t compile without ac0585d. Better to squash them.

    I split the changes into two commits to make the review easier and to be able to do the second part as a scripted-diff. This is mentioned in the commit message and the description, so it shouldn’t be a surprise to reviewers

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  21. josibake commented at 10:46 am on August 2, 2022: member
    force pushed to address comments from @furszy and @aureleoules ; git range-diff master e40eaf6 7089df5
  22. furszy commented at 1:56 pm on August 2, 2022: member

    3e6cbb2 doesn’t compile without ac0585d. Better to squash them.

    I split the changes into two commits to make the review easier and to be able to do the second part as a scripted-diff. This is mentioned in the commit message and the description, so it shouldn’t be a surprise to reviewers

    Isn’t about being surprised by it or not. It’s about being able to compile each commit separately while traversing the repository history. It’s useful when you are tracking bugs to know where test started failing. Plus AFAIK, it’s a repository “policy”.

  23. adam2k commented at 4:59 pm on August 3, 2022: none

    Approach ACK: 7089df5e9e084a61d66860e01f5aeffdcd348df9

    I’m leaving a ~few~ minor nit~s~. Feel free to ignore or take ~them~ it into consideration.

  24. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:145 in a0abea2669 outdated
    140+            else return OutputType::BECH32;
    141+            break;
    142+        case TxoutType::SCRIPTHASH:
    143+        case TxoutType::PUBKEYHASH:
    144+            return OutputType::LEGACY;
    145+            break;
    


    adam2k commented at 6:29 pm on August 3, 2022:
    nit: two of the case statements with the early return have break; and the first one does not. Could this be more consistent without the break; statements?
  25. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:132 in a0abea2669 outdated
    127+void CoinsResult::push_back(OutputType type, const COutput& out)
    128+{
    129+    coins[type].emplace_back(out);
    130+}
    131+
    132+static OutputType getOutputType(TxoutType type, bool is_from_p2sh)
    


    achow101 commented at 6:16 pm on August 4, 2022:

    In a0abea26692e63e9205ec68bdbc04cfad8c95a3d “refactor: add new helper methods”

    nit: We prefer UpperCamelCase for function names.

  26. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:127 in a0abea2669 outdated
    122+    for (auto& it : coins) {
    123+        Shuffle(it.second.begin(), it.second.end(), rng_fast);
    124+    }
    125+}
    126+
    127+void CoinsResult::push_back(OutputType type, const COutput& out)
    


    achow101 commented at 6:16 pm on August 4, 2022:

    In a0abea26692e63e9205ec68bdbc04cfad8c95a3d “refactor: add new helper methods”

    nit: We prefer UpperCamelCase for function names.

  27. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:120 in a0abea2669 outdated
    115+            break;
    116+        }
    117+    }
    118+}
    119+
    120+void CoinsResult::shuffle(FastRandomContext& rng_fast)
    


    achow101 commented at 6:16 pm on August 4, 2022:

    In a0abea26692e63e9205ec68bdbc04cfad8c95a3d “refactor: add new helper methods”

    nit: We prefer UpperCamelCase for function names.

  28. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:108 in a0abea2669 outdated
    104@@ -105,6 +105,49 @@ void CoinsResult::clear()
    105     other.clear();
    106 }
    107 
    108+void CoinsResult::erase(std::set<COutPoint>& preset_coins)
    


    achow101 commented at 6:16 pm on August 4, 2022:

    In a0abea26692e63e9205ec68bdbc04cfad8c95a3d “refactor: add new helper methods”

    nit: We prefer UpperCamelCase for function names.

  29. achow101 commented at 6:53 pm on August 4, 2022: member
    41703e57cc0d2693533240ed916b9e55283433c6 does not compile
  30. DrahtBot added the label Needs rebase on Aug 5, 2022
  31. refactor: add UNKNOWN OutputType
    add to enum, array and handle UNKNOWN in various case statements
    f5649db9d5
  32. refactor: add new helper methods
    add Shuffle, Erase, and Add to CoinsResult struct
    add a helper function for mapping TxoutType to OutputType
    
    Co-authored-by: furszy <matiasfurszyfer@protonmail.com>
    3f27a2adce
  33. scripted-diff: Uppercase function names
    Change `CoinsResult` functions to uppercase to be consistent with
    the style guide.
    
    -BEGIN VERIFY SCRIPT-
    git grep -l "available_coins" | grep -v mempool_stress.cpp | xargs sed -i "s/available_coins\.\(size\|all\|clear\)/available_coins\.\u\1/"
    git grep -l AvailableCoins | xargs sed -i "/AvailableCoins/ s/\(all()\|size()\|clear()\)/\u\1/"
    sed -i "s/\(clear()\|all()\|size()\)/\u&/g" src/wallet/spend.h
    sed -i "/CoinsResult::/ s/\(clear()\|all()\|size()\)/\u&/" src/wallet/spend.cpp
    sed -i "s/result.size/result.Size/" src/wallet/spend.cpp
    sed -i "s/this->size/this->Size/" src/wallet/spend.cpp
    -END VERIFY SCRIPT-
    b6b50b0f2b
  34. wallet: switch to new shuffle, erase, push_back
    switch to new methods, remove old code. this also
    updates the Size, All, and Clear methods to now use
    the coins map.
    
    this commit is not strictly a refactor because previously
    coin selection was never run over the UNKNOWN type until the last
    step when being run over all. now that we are iterating over each,
    it is run over UNKNOWN but this is expected to be empty most of the time.
    
    Co-authored-by: furszy <matiasfurszyfer@protonmail.com>
    db09aec937
  35. test: add missing BOOST_ASSERT
    this was missed in the original PR
    0760ce0b9e
  36. test: only run test for descriptor wallets
    since this test uses bech32m, we skip unless sqlite is used, which is the
    same as checking if we are using descriptor wallets or not
    f47ff71761
  37. refactor: improve readability for AttemptSelection
    it was pointed out by a few reviewers that the code block at the end
    of attempt selection was difficult to follow and lacked comments.
    
    refactor to get rid of triple nested if statement and improve
    readibility.
    8cd21bb279
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  39. josibake commented at 1:21 pm on August 10, 2022: member

    3e6cbb2 doesn’t compile without ac0585d. Better to squash them.

    I split the changes into two commits to make the review easier and to be able to do the second part as a scripted-diff. This is mentioned in the commit message and the description, so it shouldn’t be a surprise to reviewers

    Isn’t about being surprised by it or not. It’s about being able to compile each commit separately while traversing the repository history. It’s useful when you are tracking bugs to know where test started failing. Plus AFAIK, it’s a repository “policy”.

    Good point re: repository history; I squashed the two together so it compiles now

  40. josibake commented at 1:28 pm on August 10, 2022: member
    force pushed to rebase, address feedback + a few minor fixups, and added a scripted-diff to uppercase the CoinsResult functions. git range-diff master 7089df5 8cd21bb
  41. DrahtBot removed the label Needs rebase on Aug 10, 2022
  42. aureleoules commented at 10:29 am on August 15, 2022: member
    ACK 8cd21bb2799d37ed00dc9d0490bb5f5f1375932b. Verified all the comments of the original PR have been addressed. This PR makes available_coins easier to use and simplifies the code overall.
  43. in src/wallet/spend.h:41 in 8cd21bb279
    46-    std::vector<COutput> bech32;
    47-    std::vector<COutput> bech32m;
    48-
    49-    /** Other is a catch-all for anything that doesn't match the known OutputTypes */
    50-    std::vector<COutput> other;
    51+    std::map<OutputType, std::vector<COutput>> coins;
    


    LarryRuane commented at 3:02 am on August 16, 2022:

    Perhaps a std::map is overkill since there are only a few fixed types, and they’re represented as small integers (since it’s an enum). It seems like an array, with type as the array index, would be more appropriate. I started to leave a suggestion here to make this an array, but first wanted to check that suggestion would work, so I made the necessary changes and pushed it up to a branch: https://github.com/LarryRuane/bitcoin/commits/suggestions-25734

    That branch directly modifies only the second commit “refactor: add new helper methods”, then I cherry-picked the following commits to work with that commit (so the changes to those commits are only side-effects).

    I like the way this came out, but I understand if you would rather not lose any ACKs or take the trouble to cherry-pick this branch. Just a suggestion.


    josibake commented at 11:06 am on August 17, 2022:
    Thanks for the review and suggestions, @LarryRuane and sorry for the slow response. I do like this approach. Will definitely keep this in mind if I am working on the CoinsResult struct again soon
  44. LarryRuane commented at 3:05 am on August 16, 2022: contributor

    Concept, code review ACK 8cd21bb2799d37ed00dc9d0490bb5f5f1375932b

    Summary of my review: I made a branch to show suggestions, feel free to cherry-pick.

  45. in src/wallet/spend.h:38 in db09aec937 outdated
    33@@ -34,26 +34,18 @@ TxSize CalculateMaximumSignedTxSize(const CTransaction& tx, const CWallet* walle
    34  * This struct is really just a wrapper around OutputType vectors with a convenient
    35  * method for concatenating and returning all COutputs as one vector.
    36  *
    37- * Clear(), Size() methods are implemented so that one can interact with
    38- * the CoinsResult struct as if it was a vector
    39+ * Size(), Clear(), Erase(), Shuffle(), and Add() methods are implemented to
    40+ * allow easy interaction with the struct.
    


    furszy commented at 1:36 pm on August 16, 2022:
    I think that this comment is more suited for a commit description, not for the sources. It doesn’t provide any meaningful information.

    josibake commented at 11:07 am on August 17, 2022:
    good point, I’ll remove if I touch this in a later PR
  46. furszy approved
  47. furszy commented at 1:44 pm on August 16, 2022: member

    utACK 8cd21bb2. Left a small, non-blocking, comment.

    Plus, I would also like to have the GetCoinsByType that @LarryRuane suggested (would remove the ByType wording as the type filter is explicitly provided as a method argument).

    But, overall, it’s a non-blocking comment. We can move forward with it.

  48. in src/wallet/spend.cpp:127 in 8cd21bb279
    137+}
    138+
    139+void CoinsResult::Add(OutputType type, const COutput& out)
    140+{
    141+    coins[type].emplace_back(out);
    142+}
    


    jonatack commented at 2:11 pm on August 16, 2022:

    Quick look on GitHub while waiting for a build:

    • any reason not to inline some of these methods? i.e. remove it from the .cpp and change the .h file to the following:
    0void Add(OutputType type, const COutput& output) { coins[type].emplace_back(output); }
    

    same for Clear() (and maybe Shuffle() but only if it’s a hotspot)

    • naming nit: a param named out reads like an out-param; maybe output instead
    • header nit: maybe add missing #include <random.h> in the commit where the call to ::Shuffle is added, feel free to ignore

    josibake commented at 11:09 am on August 17, 2022:

    Thanks for the review @jonatack , great suggestions. Generally speaking, is there a heuristic we use in core for when to inline vs not?

    Also, will include your suggestions if working with CoinsResult again


    jonatack commented at 11:29 am on August 17, 2022:

    when to inline vs not?

    Inlining improves performance with the potential trade-off of increasing the code in the .h file and making changes to it slower to compile, so I think about it as: inline where performance is important, or for methods that are both very short (e.g. a single line or maybe 2-3) and that don’t add an include dependency to the header file (rather than in the implementation file). Maybe people have other criteria or thoughts about it, though.

  49. achow101 commented at 0:00 am on August 17, 2022: member
    ACK 8cd21bb2799d37ed00dc9d0490bb5f5f1375932b
  50. achow101 merged this on Aug 17, 2022
  51. achow101 closed this on Aug 17, 2022

  52. in src/outputtype.h:30 in 8cd21bb279
    25 static constexpr auto OUTPUT_TYPES = std::array{
    26     OutputType::LEGACY,
    27     OutputType::P2SH_SEGWIT,
    28     OutputType::BECH32,
    29     OutputType::BECH32M,
    30+    OutputType::UNKNOWN,
    


    maflcko commented at 7:04 pm on August 18, 2022:

    furszy commented at 7:49 pm on August 18, 2022:
    Straightforward #25869
  53. achow101 referenced this in commit 0f0508bc72 on Aug 19, 2022
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