Would you then agree that this proposal will fail at its stated purpose, particularly with respect to concerns about potentially 'unlawful' material? As that concern as expressed has a threshold of "any at all" and could just as well be performed via a "less commonly abused" path? Would you also agree the same for essentially all other forms-- that they'd simply made a few line of code changes and then evade these restrictions?
In light of that, how would the very real and significant reductions in intentional functionality (such as efficient "few of dozens" multisigs or other such constructs) be justified? How could the confiscation risk be justified? How could the deployment costs be justified? How could the "policy risk" be justified? (E.g. that bitcoin could be driven or forced in to an endless sequences of 'update' blocking actions, each carrying its own risk and disruptions)
Although your description of changes is vague and it's not possible to tell for sure without seeing the actual updates-- I don't think your suggested revisions will move your proposal off from having essentially zero risk of adoption, and if it were adopted (which I think is unlikely) I think it's a certainty that there would be a countering fork to continue a Bitcoin without these poorly justified (even essentially useless) restrictions.