I completely agree with your claim that:
It’s for this reason that the primary threat to Bitcoin by quantum computers is to its signature algorithm and not Proof of Work, hence the focus on a new address format.
The math in the footnote is for finding SHA256 preimages, but the text and cited article discusses Bitcoin mining/POW which is only a partial preimage, e.g. find SHA256 output with 75 zeros in front. These partial preimages should be not as hard as finding a full SHA256 preimage.
The quantum safety of Bitcoin POW is a an open question. Is a quantum computer than can do the POW significantly faster than a classic miner an attack or simply better mining technology? Are there other quantum attacks on Bitcoin mining?
I would frame this as symmetric cryptography in Bitcoin, such as preimages in the transactions Merkle tree, rather than mining.